Friday, December 12, 2008

Extra Credit (remaining 4)

7. For this extra credit assigment, I located 3 videos on www.youtube.com that related to my project 2 research paper:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cWg6IafmsVc

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKE3NzEwltU

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykd-syzZ4ZY

These three videos deal with the prospects of mass suffering (Virgina Tech), indifference to suffering on a mass scale (comparision between response time by governments, especially hurricane Katrina) and a personal response to a question of indifference towards suffering (Iraning president on Holocaust). From this excercise, I learned how to relate my research paper to actual events in the media, where these issues were raised and also found new events to relate my research to. I think others should do this because it helps to find actual events that can help readers understand the paper better and relate to the topic.

14. For this extra credit assignment, I went onto www.100000monkeys.com and posted the start to my own story by sigining up and adding a snippet. I think this excercise was fun and also educational in a way because now other people could complete the story that I began. It seemed very close to how our lives are changed when we interact with others, even on a small basis. Everyone adds a touch of their own flavor and their own story to our life and in the end, we each have a unique story of our own. I think others should do this because it looks lik a new form of writing and it is also fun to complete someone else's story as well as start your own.

http://www.1000000monkeys.com/snippet.html?branch=12125

8. For this extra credit assignment, I emailed Christoper Vogler and discussed his text, which we used in class for this semester. I was able to analyze the text as an academic resource and then writing a informative email to the author. I think others should do this assignment because it gives them a chance to view their texts as academic scholars and give the author good feedback on their material.

11. For this extra credit assginment, I submitted a peice of my writing (reflective paper from QFM) to the triton newspaper through my email. This assignment was a little stressful because I had to choose a peice that was well written and then revise that piece a lot, before I submitted it. I think others should do this excercise because it provides them with an opportunity to review their writing pieces in much more detail.

DONE!!

Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Extra Credit (all except four)

1. For this extra credit assignment, I went on www.freerice.com and donated around 1200 grains of rice by doing vocabulary exercises. I was given words and had to choose their correct meaning through multiple definition. I did this extra credit activity before I took the General GRE test and it definitely helped me practice for the verbal section of the test. I also found out that it was easier to break words into relations/words that I already knew, in order to find their correct meaning. I also enjoyed doing this exercise and have done it once every so often since then. I think others should try this out because it is fun and on a serious note, it helps a lot of people around the world, who are dealing with starvation-related issues.

2. For this extra credit assignment, I went on www.smithmag.net/sixwords/ and posted my six-word memoir. The link is given below the post. I basically related this to my personal memoir (project one) and I learnt how difficult it was to shorten my personal story to six words. However, it gave me the opportunity to think about my story as a whole and what it was actually about. I finally realized the underlying meaning behind my story and I think others should do this for the same reason. It really makes you think about your story and analyze it, especially when you have only six words to describe everything.

http://www.smithmag.net/sixwords/story.php?did=42371

3. I know we got a chance to hear some stories on www.npr.org (StoryCorps) during class and I heard one story that really touched me. It was about a family that had to move around during the Great Depression and how they had to leave everything behind. They soon lost all their remaining possessions on the road (too heavy, bartering for gas, etc) and lived in very desperate conditions for a while. It brought the family close together and gave them all hope for a brighter future, which they did eventually have. I come from a family-orientated background and this reminded me of my family back home, who I miss a lot, and all the tough times we faced together. I think others should listen to these stories because they will also be able to relate these stories back to themselves, in one way or the other, and this would help them connect to other people around the world who have shared the same experience.

4. For this extra credit assignment, I went on the Web of Language and read a story about McDonalds trying to get the word McJob out of the dictionary, where it was defined as “low-paying, requiring little skill, and providing little opportunity for advancement”. Many dictionaries refused to take this action because they define words without any judgmental reasons or prejudice. I learnt the power of words and how they can cause a big corporation, such as McDonalds, to have a fear for their reputation. This exercise also made me think how words can affect the behavior of people towards certain objects, such as the word couch potato. I think others should read such stories because it displays the power that any language has and also because some stories are just hilarious.

http://illinois.edu/blog/view?blogId=25&topicId=824&count=1&ACTION=VIEW_TOPIC_DIALOGS&skinId=286

5. For this extra credit assignment, I went to YouTube and watched the following two videos:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3XxOfjntFA

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EP2fBWrH46M

The first video made by a professor? (I think) at the University of Arizona (2005) and takes a very funny view at the different rhetoric that we studied in class (ethos, pathos and logos). Although this video had hand-puppets (hilarious!) and how to use rhetoric to emotionally blackmail your parents (amazinggg!), it was still very informative because I was able to relate it back to our discussions in the classroom. On the other hand, the second video also dealt with rhetoric but in a different manner. The video showed clips of famous movies (such as Men in Black, The Breakfast Club, Monty Python, etc) and asked how the different characters where using rhetoric when trying to persuade other people to ‘get’ their point (i.e. communication!!). For example, Will Smith looks like he used logos (plain old logic) to figure out that he needed to shoot the little girl because everyone else was just going about their business (not much pathos involved as you can see). From this video I learnt to use the information I got from the first video and the class discussions, and apply them to common movies that I on television all the time. I think others should see these videos because they help us relate to daily life situations (video one with the parents) and movies/media (second video) that we enjoy everyday. This exercise relates classroom teachings to real life!!

6. For this extra credit, I went to www.actsofkindness.org and read a story on how someone was given a gift by a stranger at a supermarket store, when they were young, and re-did the same act of kindness for a little girl in the future. This story to me was very inspiring because it showed me how an act of kindness towards someone, can be passed on forward to affect someone else entirely. I decided to help someone with their shopping bags the next time I went to a supermarket because someone helped my mom once, back home in the UAE. I think others should read these stories because even though they are simple in nature, they can portray a lot of kindness and are easily relatable to. These stories can also inspire people, like I was, to carry out a random act of kindness.

http://www.actsofkindness.org/node/476317

For Extra Credits 9 (Halloween) and 10 (Voting), I have already posted up blog entries for these during the term and they should be easily available through the contents tab on the upper right hand corner of this page.

For Extra Credits 12 and 13, I used up all my get-out-of-jail free cards and did not have perfect attendance, so I am doing all the extra credit assignments, in order to get the extra credit. I will be posting up the remaining 4 extra credits up within a day (7, 8, 11 and 14)

Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Rhetorical Analysis Resubmission 1 (Project 3 Four Modes)

Rhetorical Analysis
Analytical And Persuasive Writing
Project 3 Modes

Rajeev Rupani

1. Movie: Blood Diamond

Blood Diamond. Dir. Edward Zwick. Perf. Leonardo DiCaprio and Djimon
Hounsou. Warner Brothers, 2006.


Blood Diamond, a mainstream-cinema movie directed by Edwark Zwick, portrays violence and suffering caused by the conflict in Sierra Leone over so called ‘blood diamonds’. The story revolves around the individual suffering of a fisherman whose family is taken away from him. The movie also displays the indifference shown by some members of the diamond industry towards the ongoing conflict in that region. The purpose of this movie was to display the actual cost of diamonds, from similar conflict-ridden regions, by showing the massacre and human sacrifices that are a result of this trade. The audience for this movie would have to be between the ages of 16 and above, given the violence shown, and could be of either gender. The movie portrays two different views of suffering: personal and mass-scale. The rhetoric appeals effectively and accurately portray the courage and situation of the people in Sierra Leone, while relating to an individual’s fight to save his family. The ethos appeal is shown by the change of heart in Daniel Archer’s character where he eventually sacrifices his own life in order to save a family from suffering. The archetype of a father is also observed in the fisherman's character, who is constantly fighting the odds to keep his family together. The pathos appeal is shown by the senseless and emotionless massacre of thousands of innocent people over diamonds, families being torn apart, and most of all, the in-action and indifferent attitude of the ‘outer world’ towards the plight of these people. The logos appeal is presented throughout the movie because it is based on events that actually took place. The rhetorical appeals could teach my audience about suffering on a personal and mass-scale (pathos), the difference that one person can make towards easing this suffering (ethos) and how they can relate personally to the suffering that they view around them.

2. Movie: As Good As It Gets

As Good As It Gets. Dir. James L. Brooks. Perf. Jack Nicholson and Helen Hunt. TriStar Pictures,
1997.

As Good As It Gets, directed by James L. Brooks, narrates the story of a person suffering from his indifferent behavior towards other people, and how a moment of caring suddenly changes his perspective on life. The purpose of this movie was to show how a small exposure to suffering could change someone with an indifferent attitude, to become more compassionate. The audience for this movie would have to be 16 and above as well and could be of any gender. A level of acceptance towards homosexuals would be needed to view this movie unbiased. The approach of the rhetoric appeals are important in communicating the purpose of the movie but the simple and relatable plot line further cements these emotions into the viewer. The ethos appeal is shown by the interesting personality of the main character and his attitude towards society, families, love etc. On the other hand the neighbor, who changes the main character’s views on suffering, exhibits a polar opposite personality and the female character (Helen Hunt) plays a medium between these two separate ‘worlds’. The pathos appeal is shown by many forms of personal suffering such as the suffering of the neighbor when his house is robbed, the suffering of the waitress when her child is sick and suffering of the dog (initially) when he is away from his owner. The change of heart in the main character, during his interactions with the dog, is clearly displayed using pathos. The logos is shown by the common indifferent attitude adopted by many people in our present society. This movie could teach my audience about how a relatively small exposure to suffering can greatly change one’s attitude towards other people’s pain. This would also be a great example of how the most indifferent person can be the one to bring about the greatest change, for good, in someone’s suffering.

3. Book: Robinson Crusoe

Defoe, Daniel. Robinson Crusoe. Modern Library, 2001

Robinson Crusoe, written by Daniel Defoe, tells the story of an individual who is marooned on an island away from his family, and befriends a native from the neighboring island. The purpose of this story was to illustrate how personal suffering can be meaningful, through the character of Crusoe, who learns a lot about life, friendship and survival. Given the length of the original novel and the language used, the ideal audience for this novel would have to be about 14 years old or so (minimum), of any gender, and would require reading skills. The rhetorical appeals are in effect after the shipwreck incident, and the pathos appeal of Crusoe’s determination to stay alive is the most successful in communicating the underlying moral of the novel. The ethos is presented through the character of Crusoe, who despairs at first but then adapts and survives in his new surroundings. The determination shown by Crusoe to change his situation gives a sense of purpose to his suffering and makes him a better person in many ways. The pathos is presented in this story through a variety of emotions exhibited by Crusoe such as suffering, despair, determination, loneliness and friendship. The author displays the logos appeal by tackling the theme of being shipwrecked, which was common in those days. This story could teach my audience how meaningless suffering can be overcome using determination as the key. The pathos appeal would be the strongest in empowering my audience into believing that the determination of one individual can alter such situations.

4. Book: Night

Wiesel, Elie. Night. Hill and Wang, 2006.

Night, a story written by Elie Wiesel, is an autobiography of his experiences during the Holocaust period in World War II. Elie, along with his father, was taken away from his mother and sisters (whom he never saw again) and was put into a death camp in Auschwitz. At Auschwitz, he was forced to work in the labor camp and soon lost his father to disease, along with is will to live on. Allied soldiers, who were coming through Germany, rescued him soon after. The purpose of this personal story was to portray extreme forms of suffering and how this can lead to a complete loss of hope in individuals who experience such situations. The audience would have to be at least 18 years old , given the extensive details of the death camps and such, of any gender and would need a strong heart to read this difficult (in content) story. The rhetoric appeals support the sympathy expected from the reader, given the subject of the novel. The pathos appeal is the strongest in portraying the plight and situation of people who had similar experiences during the Holocaust. The ethos appeal is displayed by the author himself, who goes through a lot of emotional and physical suffering that leads to a loss of faith, hope, loved ones and the will to go on. The pathos is evident in the emotional appeal used by the author who experiences a loss of innocence and the willingness to live on, upon encountering such meaningless suffering. The logos appeal is clearly shown as the novel is an autobiography and is thus based on actual events that occurred in author’s life. This personal story could teach my audience how retelling one’s experience of suffering can empower others to be determined in the face of such unimaginable horror. The ethos and pathos combine to bring this empowerment to the reader, while the logos is utilized by allowing the reader to relate to an event that actually took place (Holocaust).

5. Song: Hope (Coach Carter)

Mitchell, Carl T., Fredrick Taylor, and Thomas Calloway. Hope. Coach Carter O.S.T. Capitol,
2005.

Hope, a song from the Coach Carter movie, sings of suffering experienced by the youth of the 21st century. The purpose of this song was to display that hope exists, in many forms, even in dire situations that relate to the youth of today such as, jail, drugs etc. The audience would need to have a specific taste in the genre of rap/hip-hop music, be at least thirteen years old, and of any gender. The rhetoric appeals are used throughout the lyrics and connect well with younger people such as college students, who can relate to these experiences, especially when experiencing a new world of all sorts (college). The ethos is presented in a universal sense, where any listener is the main character to an extent. This rhetorical appeal also displays how some young people take to crime and drugs in the face of unbearable suffering. The pathos appeal is shown in the form of despair, where someone takes the wrong path by giving up hope. The logos is presented by looking at common situations, such as in low income areas, where alternate ways are found to deal with suffering. This song could teach a good segment of my audience - younger college students and such - about how a change is possible even though the wrong choice might have been made initially, and how hope still exists in every situation possible.

6. Artwork

Jackup Sunrise. Jackup Sunrise. 2005. Google Images. Flickr. 15 Nov. 2008.

The photograph, taken by an anonymous individual, captures a typical sunrise off a beach or a coast. The purpose of this photograph could be as simple as to show a sunrise or instill a sense of hope and beauty in the viewer. The audience could be of any age and gender, as long as they view and admire the moment captured. The rhetoric appeals automatically support the image, given the location and subject of the photograph. The ethos appeal is portrayed by the person taking the photograph, who must have experienced a beautiful moment that he or she wanted to share with the rest of the world. The pathos appeal is presented by the sense of peace and new beginnings that are exhibited by the photograph. The logos appeal is shown by the fact that the photograph represents an actual event, and also through the cycle of the sun: darkness is soon followed by light, night by day and so on. This photograph could be used to teach my audience about the cycle of life and how suffering is not without an end because even one ray of hope can eliminate darkness. The audience can also be empowered to build hope, one step at a time, until the balance is restored.

Saturday, November 22, 2008

Fiction Readings (Fall Semester)

The most enjoyable reading for me this term was undoubtedly A Good Man Is Hard To Find. I admired the way it was written, where the writing led the reader to believe that the story was going to have another 'happy ending'. The gruesome events that took place shocked me as a reader and bought me back to real life, where results like that are commonly observed. The execution of the family sent shivers down my spine because the author implied that the family was killed instead of describing it (screams instead of bodies). Above all that, the character of the Misfit and the old grandma were really well written and I could relate to their complexities as a human being. The story was bought to life in my imagination, where I could 'see' every scene and dialogue happening right in front of me.

The rest of the readings were also applicable to our course because I believe they related to the common theme of reality. The Metamorphosis, The Offshore Pirate, The Bell Jar, The White Tigers, The Shadow and the Wind,On the Road and Indian Camp, all told stories of real people or individuals coming to terms with reality. I found all of these excerpts/stories to be interesting but the above tale appealed to me the most. I really enjoyed reading all the above stories and even though some of them were tough to read (emotionally), I believe the idea behind them was to affect the reader in such a manner.

Friday, November 21, 2008

Project 3: Reflection/Action

What I have done:

1. Rhetoric Analysis.
2. Volunteer Log.
3. Found person for interview.
4. Began designing poster for presentation.

Why/How:

I think all the work I have done so far on Project 3 relates well to my topic of suffering and hope, especially the rhetoric analysis. The volunteering catered well to my newly added hope section for Project 3 and the interview will hopefully combine both the topics of my presentation, providing a real-life story that the viewers can relate to.

Plan of Action:

1. Do interview.
2. Finish poster presentation.
3. Do 'trial' runs with friends and get feedback.
4. Make flyers/hand-outs for presentation day.

Thursday, November 20, 2008

Volunteer Log (Project 3)

Project Three Volunteer Log
Eckerd College
Rajeev Rupani



Name of Organization: Southeastern Guide Dogs


Location of Organization: 4210 77th Street East, Palmetto, FL 34221
(941.729.5665)


Volunteer Opportunity: I had the opportunity (through Quest For Meaning) to work with training and looking after guide dogs as well as young puppies, on regular weekends since September.


Review of Volunteering:

What did you do?

I assisted with making puppy food, cleaning kennels, walking and running puppies/dogs, cleaning play areas/yards, doing laundry, cleaning dishes and making bedding for moms (in nursery). I pretty much assisted (along with my QFM group) in taking care of the dogs/puppies over the weekend, when the regular staff was off duty.

When did you do it?

I went on weekends, alternating between Saturdays and Sundays, spending a total of forty hours this semester (four hours per weekend or more). I began in early September and will be going till the weekend before Thanksgiving.

What did you learn?

I learnt a lot about taking care of young puppies and adult dogs, during my volunteer experience there. I also observed how these trained guide dogs needed much work behind the scenes that would train them in assisting visually impaired individuals. I also saw how these guide dogs gave hope for people suffering from loss of visual abilities, to lead a dignified and independent life.

What are your future plans?

I plan on continuing to volunteer there for the rest of the year as it gives me a good break away from school and I feel like I have contributed something back to the community.